I saw her across the road
And she was all I could see
Rush of vehicles kept passing by
And she was all I could see
Then again someday I saw her at the club
And she was all I could see
People kept dancing around
And she was all I could see
A girl looked at me and said Hi
And she was all I could see
She walked away with some friends
And she was all I could see
Then one day she came to me and said, "coffee?"
and she was all I could see
its been years now
and she is all I can see.
All this while, she told me later
I was all she could see
On the road, in the club, in her dreams
I was all she could see
A lot of times in life you like someone so much that you can't muster the courage to go ahead and speak to that "someone." Never forget the fact that he/she may feel the same way about you. Our hero in the poem was lucky, everyone is not. So, don't take that chance.
12 comments:
awww wat a sad story !!
What sort of a silly ending is that !
When she was all that you could see,why on earth did you let her go?
its nt my story...some ppl do let her go...
nice one. i hope there'll be more in store.
Thank God good sense has prevailed !
Thats the kind of ending we should atleast aspire for-if it works out otherwise,there is always destiny to blame !
And yet,you couldnt resist the pessimism-was the postscript really reuired?? :)
the postscript says someone is the new love guru!!
ohh!! so She asked Him for coffee first.. the hero seems to be really lucky.. not ur story i can say :)
@brij sir....well just cause d poem started off as being a sad poem, i cudnt control myself :)
@sharan..atleast let d hero b lucky :)
last lines were the truest of all things you wrote........
I've been reading many of your posts and I feel I can go on doing so.. starting from the traffic incident to the little kid, you do captivate your audience. I like how this narration is almost surreal :)
thanks a lot sidra...hope to keep living up to ur expectations :)
@aksh....thanks
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